Hello!!I'm Sonia and I work with other volunteers for a charity event,a solidarity street market.
At this event,we sell things to raise money for poor people.
There are a lot of us and we organise this street market once a week.The things that we sell are given to us people because they don't use them any more.They're things like clothes, jewellery, toys...and some people give us money or food.
On the day of the sale we rent a big shop and we put up some market-stalls with the things.We usually sell everything and we collect about 2000€ every year, because a lot of people buy things at our market.I like working for this charity event so much because I love helping people.
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ReplyDeleteHello!! I'm Sonia and I work (together) WITH OTHER VOLUNTEERS (in)FOR a charity event, a solidarITy street market.
(In)AT this event, we (sale)SELL things to raise money for (the) poor people.
(We are many people)THERE ARE A LOT OF US and we organise this street market once a week. The things that we sell ARE GIVEN TO US BY (the) people (give them to us) becAuse (already) they don't use them ANY MORE. They're things (as)LIKE clothes, jewellery, toys...and some people give us money or (meal)FOOD.
On the day of the sale we rent a big shop and we put (there)UP some market-stalls with the things. We (are in the habit of) USUALLY sell (all)EVERYTHING anD we collect (every year) about 2000€ EVERY YEAR, becAuse a lot of people buy THINGS AT (in) our market. I like (so much) working FOR (in) this charity event SO MUCH becAuse I love helpING people.